No Trespassing

 

No ^Trespassing 
 

The Age old belief of life after death, and the proverbial sliver of 'White Light' at the end of the tunnel. Malarkey ? Maybe , Maybe not. He came back to tell about his experience. How the scent of Doom and Death mixed with Blood and Rain permeated the air ~ that fateful night the Bloody car accident happened and took his life. Yes,on that dreadful rainy night. It was his time,and he could not escape death as the Reaper came at the stroke of midnight to collect his due. And so O'le Grim,took him into a gaudy, God-Awful Netherworld. filled with twisted-jaded souls~yes A place called the~(H) word A sharp Contrast from any 'White -Light' he had known. He was the Devil's puppet who danced to the dark-dreary tune of fiery-red flames,found only in the Depths of Hell!

Reviews

[Ryan Heisel]

This piece really gets you thinking. Sometimes people believe after death it's Heaven or nothing. I love how you made this piece portray the few who find themselves in hell after death. Thank you for sharing this piece it was a great write!
-Ryan

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

Ooooh! I like it. It paints a frightening yet believable picture with few words. You did a great job with this poem. It flows nicely.
Thank you for sharing.
Love All, Mejasha