Another Time and Place

 

 

I knew you in another time and place

   accepting your bold advances 

       determined to saturate myself

            in your love

 

We shared our sweet journey together

   in valley clover and dancing daffodils

       taking all of life's chances

          throwing caution to wayward winds

 

Absorbing each other's spirit forever

   soulmates by the surrounding shadows

      of the night,chasing down the moon

         til the light of dawn,doing what we chose

 

Right or wrong

    no need for rhyme or reason

      for hard fast rules there was no need

            commiting ev'ry sin doing as we pleased

 

'Alas twas another time and place

      things changed ~there is no reverie

             a deep hush falls now,over what once was

                    ever so silently

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Fran, I really love your presentation of this poem! The visual beauty caught my eye before I even started reading your words.

My favorite lines were:
"We shared our sweet journey together
in valley clover and dancing daffodils
taking all of life's chances
throwing caution to wayward winds"

Nice job!
:-) Sharon

[.......]

This is amazing Fran, I really enjoyed this one.

[.Bunnie.]

Aww this was really romantic and dreamy.... :) So cute. Great job!!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

This is dja vue for me for I have been there also. In another life perhaps, I know the lady well for we both agree that we have been together and are together now a wonder of a write this makes one wonder if one had not met the persona then also!

[Emily B]

beautiful romance, I enjoyed this very much

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Lost moments in time are some of our greatest treasures... beautiful reflection on those sacred times my friend.

[Eleanor Rigby]

This is beautiful

[Helena]

Sweet, romantic and nostalgic. You do these poems beautifully Fran!
Another wonderful write for my "Loneliness" contest. I've enjoyed
each one so much! Thanks for "Keeping the Dream Alive" ~ Helena

[angelinmypocket]

Fran...such beautiful happiness you shared in recalling your lover's dream...then the lonliness after the fact. I think the more intense the passion...the harderthe heartbreak. Beautiful my friend.
Love/Liz/angelinmypocket

[angelina neves]

very beautiful!

[Laura E. Aranda]

This was so pretty
U just have a way that manipulate words and make them flow so eaily like the stream in your picture above
I am jealous! haha
cheers, lea