Oozing

 

 

 

Chocolate Eclairs!!

    They're the choice of my affections

                 Oozing with sugar confections

                  tempting my midnight connections

     to which I've no control

              A vice I give no rejection

                 and one that makes me drool

 

Reviews

[Wulfstan Crumble]

None of those cakes are available here in Japan. You do not know how hungry you have made me. I may have to swim the artic ocean again and get back to blighty for some much missed confectionary...flapjacks, jam doughnuts, cream slices, butter buns, shortbread caramel things...

You poem is going to generate a lot of drool. The poem is delicious but buy a mop for us readers.

[Brenda Sue]

I love this as I am a lover of pastries too. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

[E. M. Murren]

Oooo I am hungry now. LOL I have been trying to loose weight for what feels like years. LOL This is really sweet, though... okay bad pun. LOL It is lovely. Thank you for sharing.