When Love Speaks

~Love Sonnet~

 

 

 When love speaks.'tis your name whispered, I hear
Sands of life shall run deep, forever dear.

Tho~times may be, tears roll down upon cheek
In silent moments, When love does not speak
and if I find no rose,'neath a blue sky
I'll but dry my tears, and not ponder why.
For each grain of sand,new days lie in view
and ocean's tides rush in to wash anew
Another rose will yet bloom in June's air
'Lest heart dwell alone in December bare
Misty air pervades my soul from the Sea
Our love lies in sands of eternity

Yes, sands of life shall run forever near
When love speaks,''tis always your name dear

 

 

 

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Beautiful and use of old English gives it extra charm.
You have such a way with love poems.. they are not the usual you might read..
This is a bit sad .. love your picture used ...

These verses are beautiful :

Tho~times may be, tears roll down upon cheek
In silent moments, When love does not speak
and if I find no rose,'neath a blue sky
I'll but dry my tears, and not ponder why.
For each grain of sand,new days lie in view
and ocean's tides rush in to wash anew
Another rose will yet bloom in June's air
'Lest heart dwell alone in December bare
Misty air pervades my soul from the Sea
Our love lies in sands of eternity

Great metaphors and images .. also the last line says so much.

[Rebecca Rogers]

Awww this is so sweet!!!

I love this line:
>Our Love lies in sands of eternity

Nice work! :)

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I love sonnets, particularly ones like this, written with grace and smooth rhythm and heartfelt sentiment. It's a pleasure reading your work. Let me say it again: You are a very talented poet!

Sal

[An Open Venue]

you have scribed a beautiful tribute to love and a sonnet; even if a sonnet was not your aim as I have never seen this form. your words are tight and concise letting your meanings flow as easily as your syllables slide across the tongue.

I have enjoy this read

Ven

[Sarah]

This was beautiful and sweet. =) Great job tying in romance with gorgeous description of the sea. I love the rhyme and meter in this poem - it was flawless and never sounded awkward, which can so easily happen with such long lines. My favorite: "Misty air pervades my soul from the Sea / Our Love lies in sands of eternity" Such lovely imagery! Great job! =)

[Stacy]

I enjoyed this

[Just Manoosh]

When love speaks,''tis always your name dear

Truely lovely.

My late night tea party of red wine and ice cream is now complete. Thank you for this sweet treat honey.

Mx

[The Autumn Faerie]

Very nice.
I've always had a weakness for sonnets...
*le sigh*
^_^

[Nicholas Hallows]

Good job! I really liked this. The inverted syntax works well and doesn't seemed forced like it can sometimes. I like the archaic language that makes it read as though it was written many years ago. Nice! NH