Jellyfish Jubilee

for children's poetry..

Jellyfish nestled in a dream,

      medusa curl's sculpture

 is used as a umbrella hat

  sitting atop oriental hair

entwined with magical savoir faire

within the kingdom of the sea

Neptune's tune is sung

as dance of the jellies 

has just begun

lost city of Atlantis

opened its gate after a century past.

and all sea jellies ushered  

in a new sea princess

wearing a jellyfish crown

where among the starfish ship

she had been found...

  It was a jellyfish jubilee

beneath the waters

   of the deep blue sea

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the starfish ship....I like that.
these are so good, all you need is to have an illustrator...
nicely done, Fran,
j.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Jacob..you know I
thought about that..maybe
someday perhaps ..i kinda
write them to read to my grands
and if they don't understand a words
here and there I tell them and also
showing the wee small ones how
to read with me...appreciate the kind
reviews..

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I enjoyed this fairy tale like poem. It's so imaginative. Who wouldn't want to be caught up in such a wonderous world like that. Excellent write Fran. I enjoyed the journey this poem took me on.

[Fran Marie]

Thank Carlos glad you enjoyed
I enjoyed writing this one ..every
so often I write short story poems
for children..havent done any in a
long time so I thought I'd write a
couple ..am working on another
one right now..i appreciate your
reviews 😊

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I liked it a lot. I would like to challenge myself to write something in the kindergarten age someday. I feel right at that time children are more impressionable towards artistic endeavors when prompted by good art.