A Mouse in The house!

A Mouse in The house!

A Poem by Fran Marie


 

 



Yipes! A mouse in the house
Oh! what a surprise!
It ran under the sofa
I saw it with my own eyes.

Then it darted behind the TV!
What was I to do?
Sitting at my computer being oh so busy.
that mouse started nibbling at my shoe.

EEEKKS!! I screamed, you Lil' Rat!
jumping up on my chair.
I'll have to call in Tom the Cat.
Then see what you dare.

Well don't Ya kno, He stared me down
with his beady eyes as big as you please.
Then he went to town
started eating all my cheese!

Hey! you Lil' squirt, what do you think you're doing?
and I jumped off the chair
I chased him with a broom, 'Twas only fair.
but the critter kept on chewing.

Into the bathroom he ran
and hopped into the tub.
Then to the kitchen garbage can
and finally back to the living room rug

 


Well, I gotta tell Ya. I was pooped!
my energies had been spent.
I still ain't caught that mouse in the house.
I wonder where he went?

It's been a week and I've not seen hide nor hair of him.
All I know is if I do,
I wonder who will win?

 

© 2010 Fran Marie


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This gave me a hearty laugh! Thanks for sharing


Posted 7 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

7 Years Ago

Thanks..so glad you enjoyed..😀
This poem made me smile, it is something I imagine reading to little child at bed time in a comical voice :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


LOL! a fun write packed with wit and humor! the rhyme flow is wonderful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

ThNks ,Infra, so very much appreciated;
Indra Neil

8 Years Ago

u r welcome! :)
Lol lol lol lol lol. This is funny. Darn mouse runnin all over the house. Lol. Nice poem, keep writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

8 Years Ago

Many thanks, Danny, I so appreciate..
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Sorry i'm late with this...been very very busy... You are welcome :)
well this is certainly a sweet write,hope you win the contest

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thank you for entering this poem into the Funny Poems writing contest. It came extremely close to winning! Thank you for this opportunity to read your work. I would have selected it if I could have chosen more than three winners. God bless!

Posted 9 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

Not a problem, thanks for reading ...glad you enjoyed
Very warm hearted and silly.

Posted 9 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

Thank you,
Hah, go get 'em Tom!

This was funny, and that little animated mouse? How could you help but laugh? My guess, since no 'hide nor hair; has been seen of him/her again, is old Tom the Cat is a little bit less hungry now...

Hilarious stuff here, Fran Marie!

Posted 10 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

10 Years Ago

thanks, Dean,...glad you enjoyed'
Dean Kuch®

10 Years Ago

You are welcome, Fran.
That was great, it had a musical beat to it, happy, funny, creates a range of emotions...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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ahhah, this is so cute and funny. reminds me a bit of tom and jerry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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