`Sweet Sounds`

`Sweet Sounds`

A Poem by Fran Marie

Water flowing downstream
      sounds soft beyond an angel's dream
              and eagles fly their soaring wing
                  sounds of silence my soul does sing

 
The little birds that barley peep
     and murmering babes fast asleep
            these are the sounds I love to hear
                as breathless soft melodies to my ear

 
Sounds of leaves rustling thru~ the trees
     enchantment plays with each soft breeze
       fluttering butterflies and humming honeybees
           sweet soothing sounds my soul does please.





 

© 2018 Fran Marie


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Fran Marie this is the single, best poem I have ever read. I never had a poem chill my spine quite like this one has done.

The second stanza is outstanding, it flows fantastically, never jarring, never sounding wrong. The words you choose to use are perfect. I know your poems are good but I am amazed at how brilliantly fantastical this is.

Thanks for uploading it to the Can You Hear The Silence? group.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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thanks so much for entering this beautiful poem into my sound comp good luck

Posted 2 Years Ago


Your submission is now read in the http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Nature%2C-Auroras%2C-Lights%2C-Trees%2C-Water%2C-Outdoors-Contest/54059/ please stay tuned for the winning poems. Thank you for your entry. I loved the poem! I normally don't comment on spelling but one word is spelled wrong.. (Barely) :) THIS poem was awesome!!! If we are not friends add me!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Fran Marie, beautiful poem, soft,easy flowing like a baby's lullaby. I loved it. More!!!!! Richie B.100

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very pretty and soothing with one message. Only it's probably not very interesting.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I do so love to listen to nature, she sings sweetly. You did an amazing job interpreting these observations into worded images.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stanza 1 Line 2--and eagles fly "with" their soaring "wings"
Stanza 2 Line 1--The litle birds that "barely" peep
Stanza 4 Line 4--sweet soothing sounds my soul "is pleased."

The first and third are merely suggestions to make your point clearer. The second is, simply, a spelling error.

The poem, overall, was well written and left me with a sense of peace!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Fran Marie this is the single, best poem I have ever read. I never had a poem chill my spine quite like this one has done.

The second stanza is outstanding, it flows fantastically, never jarring, never sounding wrong. The words you choose to use are perfect. I know your poems are good but I am amazed at how brilliantly fantastical this is.

Thanks for uploading it to the Can You Hear The Silence? group.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congrats on your great winning poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really love this, Fran. Yes I can spend hours just taking in sights and sounds of nature. Each place has a language of its own.
Nice poem, much enjoyed.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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