Springtime Imagined

Springtime Imagined

A Poem by Fran Marie
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Sonnet

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  I'll write thee a Sonnet of joy,not sad
     painting flowers with notes a robin sings
  if only on paper the heart beats glad
      stir winter's cauldron with whispers of spring
  Imagine a view of springtime's bouquet
      hither and yon willows sway in cool breeze
grass now green their dancefloors,whence white snow lay
      'neath auzure skies enchantment takes seize
  O' that Spring's fragrance would flavor stale air
      fresh fields of heather and lavender blue
  O' that Winter's bare frost disappear
      as fair scents enter with springtime's debut


'Alas time knows days and doth count each hour
                 'til, let's imagine Springtime's first flower




© 2011 Fran Marie


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" Imagine a view of springtime's bouquet
hither and yon willows sway in cool breeze"

Ah, bless you! Heavens know how much I love poetry and that too, nature poetry :) This felt like a long, tiring walk into the woods on a springtime. Alas, I have never been to a woods before, I can only imagine and sigh. It is poets like you that bring alive the sight :) Bless you again!

Keep writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Spring is finally here. Back to back 75 degree days. I like the poem. Wishes and hope for the season of Spring. Thank you for the amazing poem dear friend.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

6 Years Ago

Thanks John , I so appriciate, glad you enjoyed..
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I love your work and you are welcome.
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alf
Hi Fran, I iterate my congratulations. A win MOST thoroughly deserved!!!!!!!!!!!!! alf

Posted 6 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

6 Years Ago

Thanks Alf ...also congratulations to you on your winning poems..
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Hi Fran. Congratulations, a beautiful piece of penmanship. I take my hat off to you, the author!!!! alf

Posted 6 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

6 Years Ago

Thsnks Alf..so much Appriciated my friend..
A happy thought to imagine Spring in all of its joy. I really like the line " painting flowers with notes a robin sings", such a beautiful combination of flower and song.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a fine concept - the imagining, - the anticipation of a Spring from past Springs well observed. Oh how we all look forward to Spring. From the depths of Winter, the heat of Summer - the decay of Autumn -- all glorious in their own right - but none as eagerly awaited as Spring. The Sonnet Form suits your writing I think, and your visions are mine too when I read it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"Imagine a view of springtime's bouquet
hither and yon willows sway in cool breeze
grass now green their dancefloors,whence white snow lay"

{God--this is simply tremendous imagery--I Love this!!!}

"'Alas time knows days and doth count each hour
'til, let's imagine Springtime's first flower"

Really--great poetry!!!

james:-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


" Imagine a view of springtime's bouquet
hither and yon willows sway in cool breeze"

Ah, bless you! Heavens know how much I love poetry and that too, nature poetry :) This felt like a long, tiring walk into the woods on a springtime. Alas, I have never been to a woods before, I can only imagine and sigh. It is poets like you that bring alive the sight :) Bless you again!

Keep writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A spring time flower is what you remind me of
tate

Posted 11 Years Ago


What a beautifully descriptive piece about spring. Just perfect for this time of year.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow! I can imagine every supple line of this poem. It's truly beautiful. Enjoyed it very much!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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