Dark Winds

 

You charm me like fog
rising from a fine halo's mist
springing forth from the dark winds of night
 
I succumb  and heed the call
longing for your touch and tender kiss
a curiosity overwhelms me,I cannot resist
 
You intrigue me like moonlight and mirrors
both crystal and onyx reflect
Allusive mysteries of life and death
 
I seek to know the powers of your mind
in an aura of sweet caress
perhaps,a smooth voice whisp'ring love,I pictureque
 
You possess my midnight thoughts
like magic writing my soul
a slight of hand with words I've never known
 
I linger in your legerdemain dream
inhaling its mystical calm
returning to the same dark winds to which I belong
 

Reviews

[Michael X]

left me breathless poetess of mystical charm you are fran, I loved this an the readers heart can't help but fall under your midnight spell of silence and seduction reaping forth the nights wind in its call of beauty and power overwhelming the heart, magical is the way the words sweep over like a cloud passing through moonlight, your words reflect silver intuition, capturing the beauty of mysterious wonderment, as to
read you is to fall into the arms of possessive enchantment, absolutely magnificent.. as your talent sings

[Rocans]

Yes, this piece is just my taste. It paints a picture of fantasy that I always employ in my own poems. I enjoyed this immensely.

[Fran Marie]

thanks so very much for reviewing;

[MoonlitAngel]

Very sweet, and it flowed perfectly. I loved it.

--Blood

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Oh how vivid this is, not to mention chilling. A beautiful picture you present one both black in content yet with a hint of excitment like a dark adventure. An erotic mystique accompanies this write. sensual yet also spritual in a shadowy way.
Truly a fine piece of work.

[SM Davis]

You possess my midnight thoughts
like magic writing my soul
a slight of hand with words I've never known


the above lines are stunning. Always enjoy reading your work.

[MagiCrystal]

Lady you blow my mind.. this is a vision envision with Magic.. awwwwwwww


You possess my midnight thoughts
like magic writing my soul
a slight of hand with words I've never known

This is hot.. it make me want to drink cold water... you are a muse.. and a poetess ! Love it

[Georgia Gypsy]

My wonderful new friend, this is the first i've read you and i must say....I LOVE your poem! I am feeling these words flow through my soul! It is dark, mysterious, and just perfect!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Brilliantly dark.. with such sensous undertones.. a bewitching and hauntingly beautiful image. This one is spellbinding.. flowing with great softness.. powerful craving of lust and passion within.. longing for that touch and magical kiss.. a surrendering of midnight bliss! Thank you so much for sharing.. can't believe I missed this one! =)

[Sean M. Addams]

the pic and poem compliment each other nicely.... you do darkness very well and it is always a pleasure reading your work... overall very impressive piece...

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You possess my midnight thoughts
like magic writing my soul
a slight of hand with words I've never known

god i love this.. how you can mix darkness and romance and make it so beautiful with choice words
it like put me in a seductive trance....wel written...