Your Words

You are my favorite book
I want to read you from
cover to cover
and start again
until I've memorized every line

Your words
A gift
Leaving me with
Wishful desires
For your
Simmering verse
Filling my heart
Challenging my mind

Your words
A song
Dance off the page as they
Sparking embers of
beautiful melodies
In my mind

Your words
cast a spell
That magically have me
In a trance
To which I submit to
With love and admiration

With your smoldering words
Of fiery love
My soul burns
As I yearn
To be your humble muse
For eternity

Reviews

[katie]

Beautiful and full of passion! I enjoyed this! Keep writing!
Also:
"To which I submit too" should be "submit to"

[Francis Orion]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!

[katie]

You're welcome! I did!

[L. Michelle Corp]

Beautiful, everything you wrote is real and I can feel it when I read it... over and over!

[Francis Orion]

I glad you can feel it. It is so real, and I know that one person feels it everytime it's read. I just can't express it enough. I am so happy you love it enough to read more than once.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow! A romantically powerful piece!
Every word devoted to an intense emotion of endearment!
Awesome write!

[Francis Orion]

Thank you again. I am glad you liked it.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.