Don't Go

Jealous to be
The hand you hold
Embracing it lovingly
Gripping it protectively
Afraid of ever being apart
So, stay with me
Don't let my hand go
Because there's nothing left at all
But Us, Just Us

Reviews

[SheIsMe]

The fear and love in this piece is so profound. I love the passion I feel when I read it. Great job!

[Francis Orion]

I really try to convey my most inner feelings when I write. I never want it to feel forced. Thank you very much.

[Perkele.7885]

I like the possessiveness of the piece, the urgency you express and the need that you exemplify in your writing. Well done!

[Francis Orion]

Thank you. I appreciate your kind words. It's what I was aiming for.