Radiant

Her beauty
stands alone
In bloom
I stop and stare
I Want to
Take her all in
As she brightens
Any room
I'm entranced
With the way
She glows
A more
Exquisite flower
My eyes will
Never know

Reviews

[MCS]

A lovely read, sweet and whispers of the magic of love.

[Francis Orion]

Thank you, exactly as its intended. :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

This is gorgeous, Francis. I hope "she" knows of your adulation!

...perfectly titled, too!

[Francis Orion]

Thank you very much, and she does :)

[Philip Muls]

Short and sweet, your poem Radiant captures how you stand in awe for her beauty. You stop and stare because you cannot do otherwise. You want to take her all in because you want to be able to remember her when she is gone. Well done. Could you review my story Lovesick as it talks about the same feelings.

[Francis Orion]

Thanks. Yes I will.

[alifeacoustic]

Perfectly captured and perfectly titled. A perfect example of just saying something and meaning it, in that unforgettable moment. Superb write once again Francis.

[Francis Orion]

Thank you, I actually struggled with the title, but I thought about. This was the one I liked the most. As always, I appreciate you kind words.

[SheIsMe]

Awwww. I love this. Does she know you see her this way? I want to behold the flower...

[Francis Orion]

Yes, she does. She is my inspiration.

[SheIsMe]

Undoubtedly. So very sweet.

[Francis Orion]

Thank you :)