Punctuation People

Punctuation People

A Poem by alice

She’s like a parentheses, hinting at more information that you’ll find just around the corner. Her slender body, curves like a smile, a little crooked, but beautiful nonetheless. He’s like an exclamation point, always exuberant and ready to be known and heard. And him, he’s a like a forward slash, listening, but never enough to be included. And her, she’s a plain period, but enough to stop every conversation, with her classic feel and showstopping presentation. But she tends to leave you hanging without even a 

© 2016 alice


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Hmm; personification of punctuation. I get the missing end of paragraph punctuation, as an unexpected end twist. Perhaps you could continue by adding more examples. ie.: Her slender body, curves like a smile, a little crooked, but beautiful nonetheless. {clear reference to comma}.

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alice

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thank you, i appreciate you 💛



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Hmm; personification of punctuation. I get the missing end of paragraph punctuation, as an unexpected end twist. Perhaps you could continue by adding more examples. ie.: Her slender body, curves like a smile, a little crooked, but beautiful nonetheless. {clear reference to comma}.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

alice

4 Years Ago

thank you, i appreciate you 💛

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