We Have Until Forever

We Have Until Forever

A Poem by FreeFlow
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Umm no specific rhyme scheme,i tried but nothing came out (i think). This is a love poem/song i wrote umm hope you enjoy and rate,comment,give feedback,and just try enjoy my writing

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Some things are simple
Small enough to count

We pay attention some
Not ones important

Our feelings arent ment to be tampered
Simple things get in the way

Remember we have until forever
To forgive what had been wrecked

To rebuild our lost friendship
       (Our relationship)
Love shouldnt be a war
         (Lets not let it go)
Battles lead to an end
    (This isnt what should happen)


A spoken word can mean so much
Some use without meaning

Their own gain is better
Then the person its told to

Mine is a true word

An angel's blessing
        (Prayers follow us)

Keep our bond ever strong
         (Steer us in the right direction)

Dont wait until the end to think
Use this time now to appreciate

We have until forever
          (Dont let it get in our way)
Ill sit by your side as long as your by mine
          (Together we'll work things out)

Forever can happen

Just let it find its way

It'll come around

To stop by and stay awhile

Forever we have

Until we are nevermore

© 2010 FreeFlow


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FreeFlow
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An Upcoming Musician(HopeFully) Enjoy Playing Guitar,Writing Songs When Called On(By My Mind) My name is Rob,Im 16,and ive gotten an intresst in writing songs,not a fannof writing but i love rightin.. more..

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