Mommy Tell Me

Mommy Tell Me

A Poem by x_Free_Sprit_x
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My mother.....

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Mommy Tell Me


Mommy Tell Me do you love tell me i’m important to you,

Mommy Tell Me why my daddy left tell me why you abandoned me,

Mommy Tell Me is it ok to bleed the pain away our if its ok to be myself,

Mommy Tell Me do hate me enough to let my brother hurt me like he did,

Mommy Tell Me why I look like my brother so much i’m not his twin i’m just me,

Mommy Tell Me if you care about me,

Mommy Tell Me tell about why daddy left me and why the kids tease me.


Mommy Please Tell Me is it the way I walk, talk, smile, laugh, even cheer for the other crowd,

Mommy Tell Me why they took me to a worser place,

Mommy Tell Me why they tattered my clothes and tried to break my bones,

Mommy Tell Me why they hate me so much, what did I do.

                     Mommy Just Tell Me

© 2016 x_Free_Sprit_x


Author's Note

x_Free_Sprit_x
This is more of a shorter on but it says a lot i guess

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The story in itself is moving; however, I was hoping the emotion would get across as much as the story does.

Looking forward to more poems though. :)





Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 28, 2016
Last Updated on April 28, 2016
Tags: Family, Love, Lost, Sadness

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