The Nicest Thing.

The Nicest Thing.

A Poem by Ellie W. Montreal

I wish that without me you'd be spending the rest of your nights awake. I wish that without me you couldn't eat, I wish I was the last thing on your mind before you went to sleep.


I am addicted,

To the acts of your attention.

Can't get enough,

I'm frail & you're just four words—four, words—

Away from my intervention.

© 2008 Ellie W. Montreal

Author's Note

Ellie W. Montreal
This one flowed really nicely. :)

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Original, and well written. Unusual mix.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good use of punctuation to create rhythm and emphasis. It does flow nicely, you're right.
Good work.

Thanks for your review the other day.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aren't we all addicted to those acts of attention?
I know I am, got me hanging like a lost puppy
who just found a owner they think they like.
It did flow very nicely Ellie :D
I liked it very much.

Posted 15 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 3, 2008
Last Updated on October 3, 2008


Ellie W. Montreal
Ellie W. Montreal

The Sunshit State!, FL

i'm Mychelle; you can call me Ellie, if you please, & i'd prefer you do. ツ i'm a poet. a really creative one. i also do photography. which i love more than anything more..