I'm On My Way

I'm On My Way

A Poem by Liam Laing

As the years pass by, I feel the heartbreak,
Not a day goes by when i don't feel the ache.
Heal it shall not, as you're the pill,
It's the lack of your presence that's making me ill.
Yet heed my words, as I lie not,
As the love that was there, will never be forgot.
Time goes fast, and fast it shall go,
I remember that day when we went with the flow.
Yet heed my words! As our love was true!
And know my heart was devoted to you.
May you know not, that I miss you now, and forever,
And remember, my dear, we'll soon be together.
For time is not the giver of life,
But the dawn of the end that follows the knife.
You heard my words "I wish you could stay."
But don't worry, darling, I'm on my way.

© 2013 Liam Laing


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Beautifully penned....enjoyed your words...Rose

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Liam Laing

5 Years Ago

Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it.
"Time goes fast, and fast it shall go,
I remember that day when we went with the flow.
Yet heed my words! As our love was true!
And know my heart was devoted to you."
A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Liam Laing

5 Years Ago

So glad you liked it!!
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Great poem! It had a very beautiful message and the rhyming truly made it a joy to read. Well done!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Liam Laing
Liam Laing

Durham, Durham, United Kingdom



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