Stay true stay you.

Your comment your tears

Your enemies your fears

They brought you down

You went even low

 Those petty words they wouldnt know

The insides what counts is that true?

So what happend to the innocent child inside of you

That hi hello it blew me away

The just remember it might be your last day

The friendship the tears laughter and fears such as we knew

Left us and blew

The crowed wanted you

They took you away

And now the real yous no longer to stay

Reviews

[Shelby]

Very interesting poem, and rather touching. I loved the line "So what happened to the innocent child inside of you" It's true, isn't it, that innocence is lost, and often you lose yourself in the rush to be accepted. This poem says so much. Al I'll say is there were a few awkward moments in the rhythm and a few misspellings. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this peice.

[Tinaa Ftehaa <3]

Ahaa thanxx appriciated...yea i knida got that to..(i have really bad spelling)