MY THEORY OF YOU

                


    What primal pulse propels
        the starry dust to fill
            the seeming void?
    Through out the vast expanding universe
        that vibrant gust elates,
            enthralls all in its bursting blast.
    What constant converse power
        counteracts that outward thrust?
            What vigor tugs and turns
                each atom back? 
    The weight of mass attracts as each
        to every other likewise yearns.

    Your wisdom
        (flash of particle or wave)
            excites, impels us,
                spinning into space--
            clear-sighted, joyous,
                resolute, and brave.
    Your dignity, compassion,
        kindness, grace, your gaze,
                your smile compels us
        just to be at peace
            within your hugging gravity.

 

Reviews

[TLK]

Nice alliteration to begin. I also like planet metaphors regarding romance, and use 'em myself.