Alive

Open passions gate
to shake the earth

to move the souls
on the edge of eternity

and dream in purple
lust and red fashion.

Where waking sleeping tigers
quench dry wells
that lust to be wet.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Tantalizing poem...

and dream in purple
lust and red fashion

simple words that stir the emotions, last verse is a killer, nicely pen'd!

[Grey]

Thank you ;)

[Quill~]

You mix dark lust with your alluring words, Grey. "Purple and red" are most definitely the color of passion and lust! Nice touch, but be gentle... You may awaken the sleeping tiger, yet...

Good to have you back Sir! ;D

[Grey]

Thank you dear. Good to be back

[Quill~]

:) enjoyed reading it, and happy you're back.

[Grey]

If you liked this, don't miss my poem Illusions

[Quill~]

:) i'll check it out, love.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing your great work...:

[Grey]

Which did you like better, the photo or the words. You'll disappoint me if you say the words. lol

[Sami Khalil]

I'll get in trouble if I answer that ( my muse watches like a hawk...lol )
You are welcome...:)

[Grey]

Aha, tied to the desires of a muse, your a brave man. lol

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...Shhhh. You are welcome...:)