Onto the sea

Onto the sea

I sailed my boat

And prayed that it

Would stay afloat

...From dawn til dusk

From dusk til dawn

In search of love

I drifted on

Onto the sea

I sailed my boat

And prayed that it

Would stay afloat

...From dawn til dusk

From dusk til dawn

In search of love

I drifted on

What happened then

I don't recall

I think it was

A sudden squall

For when I awoke

I thought I died

At the sight of an angel

At my side

But lucky for me

That was not true

For I found love

And love was youSee

Reviews

[Sethnicity]

Great use of repipition! Not a lot of people use it this well. Simple and sweet. more people should focus on that method and not allow over explanation to dilute their point and poetry.