Vacation of the mind

A moment when i was writing down my thoughts...

Alone on my own

I feel the pain of abandonment as I think about the life I lived 

Looking back I begin to pity myself

Alone on my outlook and struggles, my own true friend and nurturer 

Is this how it should be or will I find what I need in others

I haven't as of yet

The saga continues until than I feel empty 

Teasing myself into happiness with meaningless vacations of liquid only a temporary relief of what is inescapable numbing never lasts unable to shut off my thoughts and feelings

Please I pray for a resolve to be around the corner until than paradise lost

Misery dwells

I am false and fake made of stone and a fake smile

Please come join me and stay awhile?    

Reviews

[Keith LaFountaine]

Very interesting. You have a good command of words and you know how to use them. The structure of your poem is also interesting. The words show emotion, deep emotion that can't be seen at face value, but once you read between the lines you can see very well. Good job, keep up the good work!

[Isabelle Howard]

This is all my feelings right now summed up. I love it.

[Lena M. P.]

Interesting metaphor of liquid vacations to ease the pain. Lots of emotions.

[Elvalight]

* grabs the 10th tissue box, since stopping my tears is impossible* ah!!! This is BEAUTIFUL!