I Don't Care If I'm Your First Love...But I'd Love To Be Your Last <3

I Don't Care If I'm Your First Love...But I'd Love To Be Your Last <3

A Poem by Beatles9322
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2/14/11. Frankie, obviously.

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She sang you sweet songs of simple pleasures.
And entwined your fingers with hers.
Each day was like a rebirth
When you saw her imperfect perfect face.

I don't care if I'm your first love. But, I'd love to be your last. <3

She broke your heart in two
When you both decided it was through.
You cried over her every night
While she lived it up.

I don't care if I'm your first love. But I'd love to be your last. <3

I know I would never treat you so poorly.
I'd give you all of my heart
Without a tiny bit of reserve.
We've finally got it right.

I don't care if I'm your first love. But I'd love to be your last. <3

© 2011 Beatles9322


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It's really not fair that those kinds of women get the good guys before we do. We end up having to prove ourselves constantly and pay for their mistakes. I think you captured the situation perfectly!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This has the ring of a song, especially the "I don't care if I'm....." The truth is that young guys often don't use their heads very well. You're a smart girl and will figure it all out.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds to me like somebody is smitten :)
Nicely done...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know many people who found their first love. My mother is one of them. 30 years later he find out she needed help and my Stepfather found her and they been together since 1980. A sad poem with the possibility of a good ending. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love love love the first stanza.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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