A Cold Goodbye

A cold goodbye forever more

You are far gone on the beautiful shores

One day I will join you and be at peace,

But just for now I can only weep

For till we meet again my heart will never beat the same

Cause without you life is just not the same

You cared about me and supported me through

But I can never be happy

Because I am without you

Reviews

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

I know this feeling, I do. I know what it can do when put in the wrong hands, when told to the wrong people. But, your words hold steady and ring true. They let people in to a wolrd unknown, and let them see what is inside...I know pain never truly goes away as we would like, and that poeple can fill that empy hole in our chest, but know that no matter what, it will fill. When you lose someone dear, and you wish to be with them...you never move forward, and some times that's a good thing because you can learn. Holding onto the memories is healthy if you just remember the good times....I guess what I am saying is that this was so well written that it touched me deeply, and that I learned that hearts never beat the same when pain is put into it. I learned that we hold on to others for the fear of losing ourselves.

Great write, no, BRILLIANT write!!