Humans

Humans

A Poem by Pure life
"

Life?

"

Humans:

 

Humans, bee hive drones of the world,

we try to please everyone and everything.

This is what we were created for,

for now this is how we live.

 

Shall we change that one rule,

the rule we have followed by over centuries.

Or will we stay the same,

by the fear of being corrupted.

 

Will the gods strike us for changing,

but hasn't this been what they have been wanting.

For they will decide our future, our destiny,

this is the most confusing question of life.

 

We have a blank mind,

we will stay the same for centuries, agian and again.

When a select few will stand up and face the gods,

then the sands of time will turn and turn.

© 2008 Pure life


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Very good poem, but it does it does not follow the guidelines for the this weeks
"Keeping the Dream Alive". The phrase "You complete me" has to be included
in the poem....sorry! Nice job though...

~ Helena ~

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 25, 2008
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