Misfortune

Misfortune:

 

This is what happens to me everyday,

i get blamed for your mistakes.

You bring me down and then laugh at me,

you point your finger at me with an evil grin.

 

I take the punishment,

it hurts like the devil is clawing me in the back.

I stand back up,

but i know ill get pushed back down.

 

As you leave it all up to me to get blamed,

i think to myself.

That i am the better person,

you just runaway from you fears.

 

So the next time you push me around,

i will stand up.

I will come at you with all of my force,

and ill be on my way once you learn to stand on your own two feet.

 

 

Reviews

[~barefoot empress~]

Not all writing is structure, and rhythm. Sometimes we must break from these things to express raw emotion. You do a very good job here, expressing the emotions you feel. You have really connected to your audience, I myself am feeling a little 'rage against the machine' after reading this.

[Jade (insanity)]

I really liked this poem....I know exactly how you feel too. It was well written...