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Facebook post from a couple weeks ago

I guess you could say I'm "okay" again
But I still dont know where the time went
And between loving and losing, and trying to make amends
It seems I'm just losing more and more of my friends.
My life is beginning and it feels like its at an end.
Is this what it feels like to be okay again?
Is this what it's like to be eighteen?
Whatever happened to "nothing will come between"?
This world is cold
and I've lost my coat.
And believe me, I have a heart;
infact it's starting to swell.
Tell me how well you hold up
When your shell exposes you to hell.
I'm just Garit, nothing more nothing less,
and it's this that I've come to detest.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jo Todd]

You floor me with you poetry every time, i have to take a break an just think when i read one of your poems, i cant believe no one else has commented. You have such talent

[A Poet Named Garit]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you like my poetry! If I ever publish a book, I'll give you a free one! You really manage to make me feel confident about this new hobby :] thank you