Baby, We're Better Off Alone

Just another sad poem about wasted time.

Baby, we're better off alone.
I hate to say it like this
But we both know it.
Now I'll love you forever
And don't you forget it
But after all these years
Nothin' seems worth it.

Baby, we're better off alone.
So many fights,
Kicked out of so many homes.
Now times running thin
The bus is coming near
And the rain is colder
Than last night
So goodbye baby.
Have a good life.
Goodbye.

Reviews

[Aphy!]

Very nice read. I could really relate to this because I've been in situations where I had to say goodbye to someone so near to my heart because things didn't quite work out. And I've also been the one being (how do I put this) dumped in a way. So yes I can see both ends to this very tragic and sad event of "goodbyes". Really enjoyed reading this hey
Aphy

[Daisy]

so simple and such brief way to describe we are better off alone...
Nice poem.... keep it up

[Kimberly Navarro]

truth, heartfelt and realistic. I can relate to the feelings. Nicely written and expressed. very relatable and easy to understand

[GarithRoland132]

Thanks for the review! Please read my other poems when you can and let me know what you think.