Those Tender Eyes

Those Tender Eyes

A Poem by Gary McDonald

Put simply, the two most incredibly, ridiculously beautiful eyes i have ever seen. But i lost them.

If words could show the tenderness in your eyes
I would write for days at heaven's face
where clandestine pools of brown do bathe me
and a smile of artistic simplicity guides me
by hand or finger I draw the shape of your cheek
the house for a rose I dare never keep
my truth is, words are to weak to tell you
that your face is for the lucky to marvel
whilst one such as I must suffer without you.

© 2009 Gary McDonald

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Added on December 27, 2009
Last Updated on December 27, 2009
Tags: eyes, tender, pool, brown, suffer, rose, heaven, write, face, bathe, draw


Gary McDonald
Gary McDonald

Crawley, West-Sussex, United Kingdom

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