Bath

Bath

A Poem by Gatlianne


My body is bathed in
Shadowed sunlight
Filtering in from
Open window
Each curve of skin
A beautiful arch
Each dip a secret spot
Where hide my
Thoughts
Hopes
Dreams
For only me to know


© M/Gatlianne 2009

© 2009 Gatlianne


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It's a beautiful image of nature highlighting God's greatest creation: The human form. But your poem exceeds in explaining more, that though the outward beauty is seen, that which is inside, remains hidden. I was a beautiful poem.

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 Added on July 31, 2009

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Gatlianne
Gatlianne

Athens, AL



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Described by some as an alien disguised as a beautiful earthling woman, inner peace in human form, and a tiny ball of fire, Gatlianne knew at a young age that she was different from her peers. Growin.. more..

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