When in Need

For those, who give life a hard fight in adversities

Sometimes you wonder 

what they are made of?

obstacles can't haunt them

pain remains aloof from body...

They eat love

and digest hope,

entangled to thinned silk

of cloths and home

they build dense kindness...

In love with nature

and its flaws,

novice to happiness

they learn in adversities..

Tormented for black smile

disgusted for diseases

ridiculed for words

their death is neglected..

But when they rise

sun sets anxiously,

bones of greatness

life of inspiration

i know they are made of...

Reviews

[XX]

I like the flow and the way how you right it. :)

[Gaurav]

You meant 'write it'..haha..thankyouu :)

[XX]

yeah.. lol :) #sorry

[Gaurav]

please don't be sorry. as always, i respect the intention. Thankyou..

[XX]

Okay, You're welcome. :)

[Riddhi]

Very nice poem ..Really inspirational and i liked the way you narrated the qualities and such a beautiful ending...Great idea which is beautifully carved in this wonderful poem...Thanks for sharing...

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much to review the work. Appreciate it a lot.

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Very nice poem,
and the ending is really really so good,
keep it up
thanks
all member of "my poem is my life"

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your review brother. Appreciate it.

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Your welcome brother,
keep it up,

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Inspiring poem!
We all have a fighter in us, but what brings it out of the shell, is the will. Determination can make and break anything.
Great write!

[Gaurav]

And who knows it better than you..thankyou so much for the review :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome :)

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely write which reminded me of the Hindu cremations ceremonies for some reason maybe came across spiritual for me!

[Gaurav]

You bet Sir...India is a place to be for spiritual pursuits..I am glad you can relate to words here...Thankyou so much

[zunie frost]

great creativity !!!! love this work
keep it up

[Gaurav]

Thankyou again for your kind words. Means a lot.

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!! have a nice day

[FreedomFighter]

great vision and awesome finish

[Gaurav]

Appreciate as you took time to read it. Thankyou.

[Corbin Driver]

Great poem, I enjoyed it!!!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much. Appreciate it.

[sansrity sinha]

nice poem. i liked it.. specially the ending. good job

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for those kind words. Appreciate it much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the phrae "dense kindness"

a good kind of thick skin to have...when the heart is soft but the will is strong.

[Gaurav]

Yes Sir, their will with time gets perfect who face adversities. Thankyou for your kind words.