When we talk

There is no better way to love life than to love someone

I noticed Words beginning from You

and care getting affection,

when love became fatal

we talked and you closed my eyes...

Yes, we talk but know this

i fly to come back at you, my source,

it's not span of time

your Unknown beauty curves me...

You love those who can't express

the reason words flow from you,

you teach me to calm down

i want my river to immerse in you, my sea...

Yes, we talk but know this

you let me see layers of ego inside,

we will talk to eternity

making words infinite as my love is...

Reviews

[dan]

Gauravv, My first review of your work and I am immediately impressed. You have a way of TWISTING words; by that I mean the word is spelled the same and means approx. the same, but it's just a little bit OFF, and I mean that as a compliment. It's the twisting of tone and nuance, almost musical in element. Sorry I'm a bit behind with my read requests, but please to continue to send them to me, I'll get to them ASAP. Nicely written! take care...dan

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Dan for taking out time to review the work. Oh, it is not easy to read all requests but we have to because it shows our compassion for fellow brothers. So, thankyou again for this. Appreciate it a lot..

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Really nice brother,
i am in but i am not written any love poem in hindi,
bt bro.Your poem make me feel to write
thank you bro.For share,

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Your always welcome brother

[MelissaAndres]

You seem like such a wonderfully sweet, sensitive person and your love poem portrays that quite well. Good job!

[Gaurav]

Hi Melissa, those were very sweet and kind words...Thankyou so much :)

[MelissaAndres]

You're welcome!

[Riddhi]

Its really nice.A sort of short and sweet poem...Great work ....Keep it up....

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Riddhi. Appreciate it a lot.

[Jacob Clifford]

When you meet the right person, simply talking can be more meaningful than anything else in the word.

[Gaurav]

Rightly said brother. It's all about understanding. Thankyou for the review.

[Philip Muls]

Authentic love speaks from your words. Well done.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Philip for your kind words. Appreciate it very much.

[Katie Lynn]

This is wonderful. I like the way it flows, it's different but unique. Bravo!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for taking out time to review the work Katie. Appreciate it.

[FreedomFighter]

love is definitely a powerful topic to write about, well done! please review my work as well

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words brother. Appreciate it. Yes sure, would love to :)

[TinaSummer]

Where do you get you inspiration from?

[Gaurav]

haha..a question in a review column!!! i don't know...maybe, i am very sensitive and i feel things..

[Aero]

its beautiful to see your writing getting better and better. Keep it up, your a great writer.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Aero for your kind words. You are a great writer too brother.

[Aero]

Thank you Gauravv