What is it, really?

Something I ask myself alot

Where have you been, all this time
Life never forgives you, that sin in your arms
I can't hold it so you can rest,you have to fight to stay

Why are you sobbing now, child
What did I say so wrong to your ears?
It's life that you will bow to

Don't cling on for too long my body isn't here to hold
Your tears are warm to my fate body

Why are you still crying after all this time?
Death will not wait any longer
Gates can't be chained open

Angels are praised, and light is another life
Don't wait for me there
I'll never come to your side

I'm sorry this farewell isn't what you wished, but this is the best this shadow body can bo

Author's Note

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Reviews

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Very deep and filled with emotion, I think you should check your last word in last line. Should maybe be 'do'

[Evans]

Thanks!
I'll try harder next time!