Missing You

All the little, yet, significant parts

that make the whole of you,

are held in my aching heart

until I see you next.

I will wait a lifetime,

so long as you promise

to come back to me.

Reviews

[Michael G.]

Very well written and honestly thought out. It rings very true.
Good luck with your endeavors.

[Coyote Poetry]

Some promises are hard to keep. I like the desire and the motion of the poem. Separation can create yearning and a more powerful love. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote