Live

A poem about elation.

I was drowning
In the crowd
All of my
Expectations
Were strangling me
But then You came
Now I am free
In the endless sky
I can fly
So fly with me
We can soar
We can live

Author's Note

This is my first poem on here, what do you think?

Reviews

[ElizaB]

Thank you for entering your poem into my competition!

I am honoured this is your first poem and I had the chance to read it.

The whole thing made me feel happy, elated :) and alive all at once.

Your words reminded me of the song O by Coldplay. Listen to it if ever you get the chance. They are a wonderful band and have often inspired me to write in times when I have felt loss.

I really liked this. Good luck with the rest of your writing!

[Geodan]

Thank you!