The Whirlpool of Despair

The Whirlpool of Despair

A Poem by Loki the Shadow
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What happens when you reach a breking point?

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Sailing on the sea of emotions

watching the waves of rage

crash upon the vessel of my heart

This lonely ride into the scarring winds of hatred

lead to the inevitable question: Why am I here?

as i ponder the answer, the vessel swirls into the vast

whirlpool of despair.

As the tormenting screams of my doomed emotions

echo, the answer comes to me.

I'm here to help people.

When i realize this I also realized i made too many mistakes.

The memories haunt me upon my descent into oblivion

The last thought as i feel the fatal breaking of my mind:

What have I done?

© 2010 Loki the Shadow


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Loki the Shadow
any comments would be great

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wow... thats intense...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Loki the Shadow
Loki the Shadow

Pensacola, FL



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Im a clown in many ways the mask i wear is the one you see everyday. i write to express myself because i dont like to talk about emotion more..

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