Ponder

This is love Ponder upon the sands sitting with you...

 I sit here and ponder? 

thoughts of love.

Let's not ponder revenge.

Let's make passionate  love

upon the current's

of your heart.

Embrace me gently

as you once did.

Let's ponder your

caressing  eye's.

Let's make  love

upon the soft beach

of time.

So  ponder  not let's

just make love in the

ocean's wave's.

Author's Note

Pondering Pondering love wrote this march 24,2014

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I liked the shortness of this work...
yet I believe ---
there could be a need of pauses...
like I'm writing the review for example:

I sit here and ponder?
thoughts of love.

Let's not ponder revenge.

Let's make passionate love
upon the current's
of your heart.

Embrace me gently
as you once did.

Let's ponder your
caressing eye's.

Let's make love
upon the soft beach
of time.

So ponder not let's
just make love in the
ocean's wave's.

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I sit here,
and ponder...
T_H_O_U_ G_H_T_S O_F_L_O_V_E_.

Let's not, ponder...
R_E_V_E_N_G_E.

Let's make:
P_A_S_S_I_O_N_A_T_E
L_O_V_E...
upon the current's
of your heart.

Embrace me:
G_E_N_T_L_Y
as you once did.

Let's:
P_O_N_D_E_R...
your caressing eye's.

Let's make:
L_O_V_E
upon the soft beach
of time.

So ponder not:
let's just make love in the
O_C_E_A_N'S_ W_A_V_E'S...

just an idea --- just my two cents worth...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for your kind words. Blessings

[Bluefire]

I like where this is going. Ponder love instead of hate, ponder good instead of bad.
"Let's make passionate love
upon the current's
of your heart."
I like the ocean and time references.
Well done. ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you once again really appreciate it. I am glad you liked it blessings

[Bluefire]

No problem. ^^