Bestfriend to Bitterness (Dark poem)

Bestfriend to Bitterness (Dark poem)

A Poem by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
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Was written from a disagreement with my husband it is over but he was being very Negative and very Grumpy not any fun I don't write a lot of dark poems.

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Bitterness and anger is your

best friend a dark cloud follows

you where ever you go.



Everything is my fault and I

am always blamed for anything

wrong that happens.



But when I am not I still

feel it's my fault anyways.



I don't want to be around

bitterness or sadness it

isn't welcome.


When it rain's I think

god's  hurting  and he

is crying  with me.


Bitterness and sadness

is your best friend and 

you welcome it.  

© 2014 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


Author's Note

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
Was written from a disagreement with my husband it is over but he was being very Negative and very Grumpy not any fun I don't write a lot of dark poems.

Everything is fine now was written April 18,2014 Friday.

Yes BTW the black and White moon Photo is mine
was taken with my camera.

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"When it rain's I think
god's hurting and he
is crying with me."
I've had that same thought. When it rains, I think of God crying.
My mom says that when she hears thunder, it sounds like angels are bowling.
And lightning, hm.. Going to have to think on that one.
~*~
I'm sorry about you and your husband. I'm sure it will get better. ^^
Well done. ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bluefire

9 Years Ago

Never let the devil get you're joy, never give him the satisfaction. =3
No problem, I enjoy yo.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

well I am glad they make you think of home I am guessing that is a good thing :)
Bluefire

9 Years Ago

It is a great thing. ^^



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"When it rain's I think
god's hurting and he
is crying with me."
I've had that same thought. When it rains, I think of God crying.
My mom says that when she hears thunder, it sounds like angels are bowling.
And lightning, hm.. Going to have to think on that one.
~*~
I'm sorry about you and your husband. I'm sure it will get better. ^^
Well done. ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bluefire

9 Years Ago

Never let the devil get you're joy, never give him the satisfaction. =3
No problem, I enjoy yo.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

well I am glad they make you think of home I am guessing that is a good thing :)
Bluefire

9 Years Ago

It is a great thing. ^^

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