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Japanese Bride of Elegances

Japanese Bride of Elegances

A Story by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
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Inspired by the Photo of Kyoto Japanese Bride and she is Simply Stunningly Beautiful. She is ASUMI meaning Morning Beauty and it is a Japanese female name written May 28,2014

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Fair light skin soft and pink,


Her beauty dances in

the wind like the Cherry Blossom's.


A vision  of beauty

she is without  make-up

where  her Elegant grace and Beauty isn't hidden.


A swaying flower as she walks

full of virtue and value.


Today she is a Bride

to a Humble man that loves her dearly.


Untouched Bride of God

Innocence's in white,


Beautiful Japanese

Bride.


Her value and gentle virtuous

Heart is far more valuable then 

any pearl and Diamond.


She will be given  to

a man of kind and Humble

Heart of God.



He awaits  for his

Kyoto Japanese Bride

to come.


Breathtakingly Beautiful

innocent and pure.


This marriage was planed when

they were children  it was love

when they meet.


They played and frolicked just

as children and are friends

but as they  grew to their  20's

and 30's it grew  to love and longing.



Out comes the Shining

Bride ASAMI.



She takes Yasushi

Shins hand  her husband to be.


Fair soft skin vision

of  Beauty.



Pink Cherry Blossom

skin  like the flower.


ASAMI sways with a

gentle virtuous Heart.


Hair of Black silky

midnight soft to the touch.



My Beautiful ASAMI

here she comes.


 She takes  Yasushi Shins

hand her husband to be.



They say their Vows

and  are Wedded and kiss.



You're Mr. and Mrs. Shin

everyone Cheers  and now

their new life will start  together.


She is a Japanese Bride

of Elegances and Beauty

and now she's  my Wife.

 

© Benita-Staebell-McCartney

© 2015 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


Author's Note

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
Inspired by the Photo of Kyoto Japanese Bride and she is Simply Stunningly Beautiful.
She is ASUMI meaning Morning Beauty and it is a Japanese female name And his First name is Yasushi meaning Honest and peaceful and his last name is Shin meaning truth both Male Japanese names his are the last name she had before she married him was a male name it was DAIKI meaning "great glory / great nobility written May 28,2014

All culture of Asians ones I know are Traditional Respectable and most Respect their Elders and are friendly now their is ones that come here and learn the Americans bad habits from ones that are not Modest and with out Manors and don't have god in their lives some times the children like many get around the wrong crowds but I have not seen many Rude Asians but a rude person is in all cultures and race and Creed there is going to be someone that doesn't want to listen and be rude and follow their Emotions and I am not being Racist I just don't get along with the cultures that can't look at a woman with out thinking sexual lustful things and they really need god in their lives and mostly the woman cover every thing all you see is their eyes and if I went to another country I wouldn't walk alone and I wouldn't show my flesh if that's how they looked at me I am married I don't think that way and I have enough problems with men that are not godly men the Godly ones and ones that were taught how to treat a woman and be respectful and Modest they don't bother me they are quite respectable.


P.S. I went searching for the names and gave the characters the names even the Bride in the photo so that isn't her real name but it is in this piece I wrote.

I love different cultures there is Native American Cherokee and German Scottish and Spanish on my mothers side of the family and Cherokee German Irish French Canadian and British on my Fathers side of the family my mother cooked many Asian foods chines Vietnams their egg Rolls are so good my mother is an amazing cook we ate German and Irish foods like Potato's Cabbage Bratwurst with Sour croute she cooked them in the pan it is Irish I believe we ate spicy foods too and my mother was and is a healthy cook she Did Lebanese food too cook so that's why I don't like going out to eat too much but now in then is nice but I'm picky about what goes in to my mouth we have Vietnamese friends that have known me since I was very little sweet people we have friends from Poland I have even tried Polish food very good. and yes I know about the Cultures how Vietnamese were in the past these are good people because of ones culture doesn't mean they are bad God Defines us nothing else Enough said.



Traditional japanese music - Rokudan (fan video)

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Dreamily delicious with its cherry blossom and white innocence. The atmosphere of tenderness and love is felt in the rhythm and imagery of the poem.. Lovely.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

4 Years Ago

Thank you my friend 😊
I appreciate your kind review 😁
a most beautiful piece of poetry filled with vivid imagery...beautifully penned

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words and review and comment I really appreciate it. I am glad that you Enjo.. read more
You're Mr. and Mrs. Shin
everyone Cheers and now
their new life will start together.

Simply beautiful dear. Really knowledgeble.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words and review and comment I really appreciate it. I am glad that you Enjo.. read more
This is beautiful and graceful.
Lovely.
lissalovesyou:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words and review and comment I really appreciate it. Blessings. Kindred poet.. read more
this has much beauty to it...and i feel thankful for this relationship that those who were put together did find immediate love....

not a fan of arranged marriages..but sometimes i am sure they do work out.

i like the description in this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

I don't like arranged marriages either but it is always a happy ending In a lot of my poems and I .. read more

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