Whispers of wings

Whispers of wings

A Poem by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
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old poem I was 32 when I wrote this April 3 2011 Angels are fascinating

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Every time  I cry I

hear  beautiful winds

of angel wings present.


Whispers of tears

swimming in a water of

painful Lamentations

of your sorrow.


Drifts of  the Ocean

takes us away  from our worries.



When the  sunshine's I know

you're smiling down upon me.



Listen do you hear the

whispers of the angels wings

in the wind.




Copyright Kindred poet/ Benita Staebell McCartney

© 2014 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
old poem I was 32 when I wrote this April 3 2011 Angels are fascinating

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I love the serene, soft, spiritual imagery that this write evokes...
Beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing! c:

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

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ms. barrie

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Benita, the pleasure was all mine - Blessings to u as well - .b
I loved this poem! such emotions were left with each line written... very good!

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

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B.J
Fascinating a beautiful read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

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B.J

9 Years Ago

your most welcome
Lovely writing my friend, very soft and beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

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This is beautiful, with such a deep meaning to it. They cover us, protect us, they are the whisper in the cold night. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

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The Black Warrior

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome, thank you for sharing! :)
butterflies and angels seem to go hand in hand a lovely write

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

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Ghostly and sad, like a dream of pale colors which you are most detatched from but seem to remember more clearly than others.
I like those kind of dreams, and this poem.
Well done. ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

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Bluefire

9 Years Ago

You're welcome.
a most beautiful and serene piece... so well expressed in poetic verse...nice job on this onE!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

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A beautiful poem my friend. Good to hear the Angels in the wind. Their whispers are make us know calm and peace. Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry my friend.
Coyote

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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

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Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
this is an amazing poem, very short and simple yet absolutely beautiful. great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

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