Unspoken Dreams

A collaboration By Benita Staebell McCartney and Steven Moses Wallach Written Jan. 15, 2015 on FACEBOOK writer's of the storm for Mash up Thursday

A collaboration By Benita Staebell McCartney and Steven Moses Wallach

Unspoken Dreams

 

In this silent joy of life's storm I see...
your beautiful peace holding me
up in your hands.

In this poetic rhyme I see a soft opal
muse that whispers down the
halls and the inspirations echoes.

That muse exists in me
Exists in everyone else too
Not to be confused
With moments of euphoric chemical
Temporary enjoyment
Nothing lasts long
Always a fly in a poets ointment
However
When human hands have tainted
While creating
Just to burn that painting
In a violent outrageous attempt
At having message sent
And maybe heard
Nothing to do with payment
The fact is these are all just words
The creative process
Is nothing without the passion
The reason for not needing a season
To have a celebratory
Celestial
Celebration
Of vocabulary
And it's discordant
Organization
This is the only method
That's truly effective
To paint the verbal painting
Never completed
Always more metaphorical canvas
To cover
With the minds ink
The words and the way a poet thinks
This is nothing
With no meaning
Nothing distinctly
Makes it mine
Than the words used
And in what frame of mind ?

Upon This eisel words are painted
in the deepest parts
of the poets mind to unspoken
untold places lands
in the heart and mind
of a passionate poet.

These thoughts are drawn
deep upon this
blank piece of paper that the
poet fills
with their aspirations dreams
passions inspirations.

Author's Note

A collaboration By Benita Staebell McCartney and Steven Moses Wallach

Written Jan. 15, 2015 on FACEBOOK writer's of the storm for Mash up Thursday



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Reviews

[Ed Fagan]

Writing alone is sometimes hard enough ... I can't imagine it could get easier with two people. This was a good write. There is a certain feel of conflict almost a tug of war. That could just be the way I read it though.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

It was hard at first as he thinks little differently then I do so you're feeling the emotions in this piece that's great and yes it turned out amazing afterwards. I don't have problems writing alone if you ever want to collaborate I will with you. Thank you for your kind review and comments they're appreciated. god bless. Benita