Thrilling Killer
A Story by
Gillzy
Contest: Describe a story in just 10 words.
She was thrilled in the bedroom, killed in the kitchen.
© 2008 Gillzy
Featured Review
You are so right, just who can you trust? This will amuse you. I used to be a chef.
She was thrilled in the kitchen, killed in the bedroom..............thats my alternate version!
So pleased you have a top story. Well done!!!!!
Hope you win the contest.
Posted 17 Years Ago
11 of 11 people found this review constructive.
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Very nice piece. I love all the possibilities - its kind of like radio before tv. You fill in the blanks for yourself instead of being spoonfed everything. Nice.
Posted 17 Years Ago
Very nice piece. I love all the possibilities - its kind of like radio before tv. You fill in the blanks for yourself instead of being spoonfed everything. Nice.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow,Gillian! I hope it won. It's fantastic... very powerful.
Posted 17 Years Ago
Wow,Gillian! I hope it won. It's fantastic... very powerful.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Such a lot said in so few a wrods, but it adds so much thought, so many f=different scerios, and so many questions, could be a beginning of a story that would hook people in from this one sentence. XX
Posted 17 Years Ago
Such a lot said in so few a wrods, but it adds so much thought, so many f=different scerios, and so many questions, could be a beginning of a story that would hook people in from this one sentence. XX
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I like it because it's short!!! I am basic , i do not like reading essays. I am really glad you are highlighting how dangerous kitchens are.
Posted 17 Years Ago
I like it because it's short!!! I am basic , i do not like reading essays. I am really glad you are highlighting how dangerous kitchens are.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
with the candlestick, by Professor Plum... LOL
or, what happens when the Kissing Bandit has to escalate his modus operandi to be satisfied...
LOL, LOL
I could go on, but you've written an outline that could be developed SO many ways . Everyone that comes to this is instantly engaged and goes their merry way fleshing out their own details. Good job!
Posted 17 Years Ago
with the candlestick, by Professor Plum... LOL
or, what happens when the Kissing Bandit has to escalate his modus operandi to be satisfied...
LOL, LOL
I could go on, but you've written an outline that could be developed SO many ways . Everyone that comes to this is instantly engaged and goes their merry way fleshing out their own details. Good job!
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
thank you for posting this. I read gary's work and suspected this was the original, but wasn't sure! Very good ten word story, perhaps you can't trust anyone! : )
Posted 17 Years Ago
thank you for posting this. I read gary's work and suspected this was the original, but wasn't sure! Very good ten word story, perhaps you can't trust anyone! : )
4 of 5 people found this review constructive.
This is great.. alot said in 10 words!
Chloe
xoxo
Posted 17 Years Ago
This is great.. alot said in 10 words!
Chloe
xoxo
5 of 6 people found this review constructive.
Answer: No, you cant! (oh, well maybe you can, but ony THE ONE! ...LOL)
Love it! Both witty and dark!
Posted 17 Years Ago
Answer: No, you cant! (oh, well maybe you can, but ony THE ONE! ...LOL)
Love it! Both witty and dark!
7 of 7 people found this review constructive.
What!!!!
She was killed shocker!!!!
Posted 17 Years Ago
What!!!!
She was killed shocker!!!!
8 of 9 people found this review constructive.
very tentalizing ironic :P mishel
Posted 17 Years Ago
very tentalizing ironic :P mishel
8 of 9 people found this review constructive.
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Gillzy Scotland, United Kingdom
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