Clown To Care

Clown To Care

A Poem by Gillzy

Instincts
Can be erroneous.
Beliefs
Can be bogus.
Sometimes efforts
Will be futile.
And emotions
Left
To
Rot.

A thought can be confused
By a misinterpretation
Of muddled interactions.

A fool
Can be fooled
By foolish ways.

You're a fool to fall in love,
But
To live without
Would be foolish.

When a love goes unseen,
The heart
May tend to fail.
Making a ridicule of romance,
A disaster of desire.

You're a loser in love.

© 2008 Gillzy


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Love - great fondness, feeling roused by person or thing that gives one delight: strong attachment with sexual feeling : the object of affection - Yeah, you are so right.

You�re a fool to fall in love,
But
To live without
Would be foolish.

Really enjoyed this, hope to see more.....

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Hey Gillzy! Ouch. This one hurts. Don't worry, brush yourself off and get back on it. It's all good. Better to be love's fool, than to be a fool without love. It's worth it. Just watch out for those left hooks. You're going to be fine ... and any ways ... f*%& him. Cheers! Rob

Posted 17 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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