Fisting the Air

Fisting the Air

A Poem by Himaya Ka
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Tears over spilt milk over and over won't turn it into powder

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FISTING THE AIR

Hungry of waiting
Thirsty for wanting
A deep longing
A child is crying

Crying for attention
Crying for affirmation
Crying for affection
But received only rejection

Imprisoned in a baby walker
Tears over spilt milk over and over
Won't turn it into a powder
It's a waste fisting the air

Come on baby, stand up!
Stop looking at the ground, look up!
Let me clean what you've messed up,
Let go of that bottle, just give it up!

Put down that fist
Get ready for a new meat
Don't wrestle just taste
For sure you will like it

© 2020 Himaya Ka


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I think the poet is addressing the inner child, which is in pain over frustration and rejection. However, the last verse is encouraging, as though the inner adult has control over the situation.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Himaya Ka

3 Years Ago

Yes, it is. Everyone has her/his own shares of immaturity, and it will always hunt from time to time.. read more

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Himaya Ka
Himaya Ka

Cebu City, Visayas, Philippines



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