Unstable

I put it all on the table
even though I knew, the legs weren't stable
I wish
 I could replace all the hate
and fix all the mistakes
her heart was like glass
a few cracks
is all it took to break
I knew that would happen
if she ever found out
but I thought I was good
and it wouldn't get out
I took a risk
but never considered
 it would end up like this

Author's Note

not finished with this one yet.

Reviews

[H]

I like this poem a lot. Even though it's unfinished it says so much, filled with sorrow and remorse. Great imagery as well.