The weight of these ashes

The weight of these ashes

A Poem by DistanceFromTheDawn
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Death can be heavy... no other way to say it.

"
the moon
thin and arched
rises like a broken rib
and floats in the ocean
of blistered ink,

in Mother’s tomb
I sleep, trampled by fear
for I have not visited Father’s since
I lit that sun burnt candle with his voice-
the dust sizzled,
groveling in murky breaths of parched regret

forgetful Gods
neglected to clarify
motive for painting over
such perfection,
leaving only empty hands reaching
for a holy neck
to where they can latch

I found the bitterness
wounded and sulking
on the side of the road,
the stare of a child
and hooves of a graded and tangible nostalgia

the snap of its neck
avalanched through my trembling hands,
then embedding its pelt
into the youth of my skin
I craved bone deep pockets for the weight of those ashes

© 2011 DistanceFromTheDawn


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Speaks volumes of the passion of your craft. Truly well-penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This one I need to mull over and find a commonality of reference...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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DistanceFromTheDawn
DistanceFromTheDawn

Missoula, MT



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I Enjoy being lost, and wish not to be found. I am 26, and have been writing poetry for over 10 years now. I am also into photography. "Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they.. more..

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