i want it!

i want it!

A Poem by Laminators Dubai
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something i wanted...and now i got it....so im happy much more than usual....

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its too shine,
and yess i want it!
take my breaths,
take my soul,
yess i want it!
i want it whole,
give it to me now,
i dont care,
i want it here,
if i never have it,
than call someone to save it,
yeah
sure
i will break it,
so you cant use it,
its all on you,
if you wanna save it,
than you should give it,
and you know,
if i want it,
i get it...
.....

a glitch that can stop you

© 2013 Laminators Dubai


Author's Note

Laminators Dubai
i want a review NOW!

hope you enjoyed my madness..^^
show me some criticism...
thanks for give a review...yeah ...i know you will...

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The girl in the poem was determined to get it and she did! I had a slight problem reading the written poem, but when I read it aloud it sounded much better and had quite a beat!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great Aunt Astri

8 Years Ago

Keep reading and writing, Glitch!
Great Aunt Astri

8 Years Ago

Thanks, Glitch. Keep reading and writing!
Great Aunt Astri

8 Years Ago

Thanks Glitch for your kind comments. Keep reading and writing!
I love this this is me to the boys I hang out with at school there like my brothers

Posted 8 Years Ago


Laminators Dubai

8 Years Ago

ha ha ha....
thanks for coming! ^^
Izabe143

8 Years Ago

Welcome. It like when they grabs food at lunch and leave it unattended its a mistake it almost all g.. read more
Laminators Dubai

8 Years Ago

ha ha ha...cool....
A poem of pure obsession. Hey we get what we ask for. We have not because we ask not! Get yours before someone else gets theirs! Thanks for this poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


Laminators Dubai

8 Years Ago

well i got what i wanted...im feeling better than great!

thanks eddie...for commenti.. read more

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Added on September 7, 2013
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Laminators Dubai
Laminators Dubai

United Arab Emirates



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