sorry...

a write can live
live untill he write
a lover can live
live untill he hold her tight
a winner can live
live until he lose
a human can live
live untill he live for others
a good one can live
live untill he do good
a fool can live
live untill he love to be fool
i can live
live untill i question everything
you can live
live untill you answer my questions...lol

Author's Note

its for fun...not to think!
then why are you thinking now!?

Reviews

[MBUYISA]

goodread, this poem is indeed for fun, i loved reading it

[Ren Black]

This is very beautiful but I'm not sure about the "lol" at the end; I don't think it works. The rest of the poem, however, is very well written and a great expression of emotion. My favourite line is, "a lover can live, live until he hold her tight."

[Laminators Dubai]

its just i question too much...people chuck...so its a lol...you are less fun person....its not your fault...lol....
thanks for everything! ^^

[00000000000000000000000..]

A lover can live Live till he holds her tight,I love it great poem!

[Laminators Dubai]

Its a wish to get hold and thank you so much...^^