aged love...

aged love is awesome...try it...

using a glass
but its not there
watching the past
but its not there
future is beautiful
but i dont care
if you have love
but its not shared
how many days you can
store in jars?
how many hours?
love is a life
love gonna lose its price in future
you need a heart
to keep this love safe
leave it
leave it there
love will age
smoke of time
will at more flavor
and aged love
taste great
so let our love age and
arrange this party of life
wait......where is my drink?

Author's Note

its not too much...but thanks for reading! or should i say eating...lol

Reviews

[MBUYISA]

you can never stop writing, remember, being a poet is not a profession but a condition

[Laminators Dubai]

WOW
but i guess the condition is gone....after your words...i guess i can write....no one said something like this to me....
thank you so much...i will return the love..^^

[MBUYISA]

sweet, i can't wait to read your work

[Laminators Dubai]

well
im not gonna take time...

[MBUYISA]

sweet poem i like the rhymes, keep sweet poems coming

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks pal....but i guess im done with writing...but lets wish...god is here...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

"and aged love
taste great "

Wow! Nice analogy of love and wine which both taste great when stored longer.
Keep writing.

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks for this review........glad you like it....

[Great Aunt Astri]

I had a little giggle at this! Yes we do 'sup' on love and yes, like wine it should improve with age! And you are right, we do need a glass (heart) to store it in. Keep writing Glitch.

[Laminators Dubai]

thats right!
thanks for this review!!!! ^^
love ya!