FREAK

a thing is nothing to you but you are lower than this nothing for him

like a crack of the door

in the castle

like a sour

in the sweets

like a tower

in the sea

like a sack of dust

in the windy weather

like a dead firefly

in the shade 

like a dead butterfly

in the garden 

like a old desk

in the new house

like a rusk 

in the party

i mean nothing for you

so they called me freak

but you are less than this for me...

Author's Note

its a word play for those who think that someone or something is a NOTHING...

Reviews

[joey]

i love this one, all the thought you put into it is exuded eloquently :) thank you for sharing glitch

[Laminators Dubai]

glad you enjoyed joey...have fun! ^^

[Ren Black]

Very powerful and beautiful at the same time. Great write.

[Laminators Dubai]

yup...darkness has its awesome beauty...and thank you so much for reviewing ^^

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

I really like the comparisons. It's like something in the past you...just...can't...get...rid of. I like the two last lines, really capture the poem.

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks!
im actually getting better in this end thinggi...there are still something...something i cant get rid of it....